Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

深圳雅思英語(yǔ)怎么提升?提升雅思我們首先會(huì )關(guān)注到以下這些問(wèn)題:

* 舉例冗長(cháng),足足花了約60個(gè)單詞,結果就是,段落重心偏移至這個(gè)"小

故事"上,而不是例子前的分論點(diǎn),例子就失去了它作為論證證據的作用;

* 措辭口語(yǔ)化,選詞隨意;

* 表述模糊,包括a lot of aspects, a specific environment等。

解析:

* 信息濃縮,豐富語(yǔ)義,讓例子核心信息成為句子的主干:acquiring 

English enables them to continue tertiary education,這樣語(yǔ)義豐

富的一個(gè)長(cháng)句子印證前面的觀(guān)點(diǎn);

* 信息濃縮,"寫(xiě)論文、和導師討論專(zhuān)業(yè)問(wèn)題、參加社會(huì )活動(dòng)"等一系列

流水賬式的內容,改寫(xiě)為"English has become the major language of 

monograph and academic forum";

* 選詞,詞匯的選取要避免口語(yǔ)化,詞義要;

* set up for 為…作準備

* acquire習得

* enable 使能夠

* tertiary education *教育

* monograph 專(zhuān)著(zhù)

* academic forum 學(xué)術(shù)講座